Reviewer #1 (Public Review): Kynurenine monooxygenase blockade reduces endometriosis-like lesions, improves visceral hyperalgia, and rescues mice from a negative behavioural phenotype in experimental endometriosis

Peer review process Not revised: This Reviewed Preprint includes the authors’ original preprint (without revision), an eLife assessment, and public reviews. Read more about eLife’s peer review process.Editors - Reviewing EditorOmowumi KayodeMountain Top University, Makogi Oba, Nigeria - Senior EditorBenoit KornmannUniversity of Oxford, Oxford, United Kingdom Reviewer #1 (Public Review): Summary: This study explores the therapeutic potential of KMO inhibition in endometriosis, a condition with limited treatment options. Strengths: KNS898 is a novel specific KMO inhibitor and is orally bioavailable, providing a convenient and non-hormonal treatment option for endometriosis. The promising efficacy of KNS898 was demonstrated in a relevant preclinical mouse model of endometriosis with pathological and behavioural assessments performed. Weaknesses: (1) The expression of KMO in human normal endometrium and endometrial lesions was not quantified. Western blot or quantification of IHC images will provide valuable insight. If KMO is not overexpressed in diseased tissues ie it may have homeostatic roles, and inhibition of KMO may have consequences on general human health and wellbeing. In addition, KMO expression in control mice was not shown or quantified. Images of KMO expression in endometriosis mice with treatments should be shown in Figure 4. The images showing quantification analysis (Figure 4A-F) can be moved to supplementary material. (2) Figure 1 only showed representative images from a few patients. A description of whether KMO expression varies between patients and whether it correlates with AFS stages/disease severity will be helpful. Images from additional patients can be provided in supplementary material. (3) For Home Cage Analysis, different measurements were performed as stated in methods including total moving distance, total moving time, moving speed, isolation/separation distance, isolated time, peripheral time, peripheral distance, in centre zones time, in centre zones distance, climbing time, and body temperature. However, only the finding for peripheral distance was reported in the manuscript. (4) The rationale for choosing the different dose levels of KNS898 - 0.01-25mg/kg was not provided. What is the IC50 of a drug? (5) Statistical significance: (a) Were stats performed for Fig 3B-E? (b) Line 141 - 'P = 0.004 for DEGLS per group' However, statistics were not shown in the figure. (c) Line 166 - 'the mechanical allodynia threshold in the hind paw was statistically significantly lower compared to baseline for the group' However, statistics were not shown in the figure. (d) Line 170 - 'Two-way ANOVA, Group effect P = 0.003, time effect P < 0.0001' The stats need to be annotated appropriately in Figure 5A as two separate symbols. (e) Figure 5B - multiple comparisons of two-way ANOVA are needed. G4 does not look different to G3 at D42. (f) Line 565 - 'non-significant improvement in KNS898 treated groups'. However, ** was annotated in Figure 5A. (6) Discussion is very light. No reference to previous publications was made in the discussion. Discussion on potential mechanistic pathways of KYR/KMO in the pathogenesis of endometriosis will be helpful, as the expression and function of KMO and/or other metabolites in endometrial-related conditions. The findings in this study generally support the conclusion although some key data which strengthen the conclusion eg quantification of KMO in normal and diseased tissue is lacking. Before KMO inhibitors can be used for endometriosis, the function of KMO in the context of endometriosis should be explored eg KMO knockout mice should be studied. Reviewer #2 (Public Review): Summary: The authors aim to address the clinical challenge of treating endometriosis, a debilitating condition with limited and often ineffective treatment options. They propose that inhibiting KMO could be a novel non-hormonal therapeutic approach. Their study focuses on: • Characterising KMO expression in human and mouse endometriosis tissues. • Investigating the effects of KMO inhibitor KNS898 on inflammation, lesion volume, and pain in a mouse model of endometriosis. • Demonstrating the efficacy of KMO blockade in improving histological and symptomatic features of endometriosis. Strengths: • Novelty and Relevance: The study addresses a significant clinical need for better endometriosis treatments and explores a novel therapeutic target. • Comprehensive Approach: The authors use both human biobanked tissues and a mouse model to study KMO expression and the effects of its inhibition. • Clear Biochemical Outcomes: The administration of KNS898 reliably induced KMO blockade, leading to measurable biochemical changes (increased kynurenine, increased kynurenic acid, reduced 3-hydroxykynurenine). Weaknesses: • Limited Mechanistic Insight: The study does not thoroughly investigate the mechanistic pathways through which KNS898 affects endometriosis. Specifically, the local vs. systemic effects of KMO inhibition are not well differentiated. • Statistical Analysis Issues: The choice of statistical tests (e.g., two-way ANOVA instead of repeated measures ANOVA for behavioral data) may not be the most appropriate, potentially impacting the validity of the results. • Quantification and Comparisons: There is insufficient quantitative comparison of KMO expression levels between normal endometrium and endometriosis lesions, and the systemic effects of KNS898 are not fully explored or quantified in various tissues. • Potential Side Effects: The systemic accumulation of kynurenine pathway metabolites raises concerns about potential side effects, which are not addressed in the study. Achievement of Aims: • The authors successfully demonstrated that KMO is expressed in endometriosis lesions and that KNS898 can induce KMO blockade, leading to biochemical changes and improvements in endometriosis symptoms in a mouse model. Support of Conclusions: • While the data supports the potential of KMO inhibition as a therapeutic strategy, the conclusions are somewhat overextended given the limitations in mechanistic insights and statistical analysis. The study provides promising initial evidence but requires further exploration to firmly establish the efficacy and safety of KNS898 for endometriosis treatment. Impact on the Field: • The study introduces a novel therapeutic target for endometriosis, potentially leading to non-hormonal treatment options. If validated, KMO inhibition could significantly impact the management of endometriosis. Utility of Methods and Data: • The methods used provide a foundation for further research, although they require refinement. The data, while promising, need more rigorous statistical analysis and deeper mechanistic exploration to be fully convincing and useful to the community.